After I had presented my pitch I was given an idea by Phil about changing my story into a buisness type situation where the cancer would try and take over the bodie's buisness and this way will show how cancer corrupts and attempts to over take the body, I thought that my previous idea was going to be to much work to produce in maya and my tutors also commented on this.
I now have a clearer idea on what my story is going to be.